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[雅思托福] 名师雅思写作范文解析

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发表于 2016-10-21 22:28:28 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
名师雅思写作范文解析

2016年9月24日雅思考试大作文考察的观点类型的社会类的话题,对于社会类题型已经是可以算为一个经常考察的类型了,同学们也都很熟悉了。环球教育雅思写作名师杨亮老师对这篇关于邻里间相处现象话题作文给出了一篇范文,一起来看看吧。

  City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has lost. Why this happens? And how to solve this? 20160924

  Neighbors have not been on the list of persons who people can call to have a chat or party together for a long time, since people began to move to relatively isolated apartment buildings to live in. With majority of people realizing the significance of contact with others living around, it is the high time to step out of their apartments to enjoy the time with their neighbors.

  All reasons that might lead to this situation can be attributed to people's modern lifestyle with excessive stress and hurry. In the morning, most people will rush to where they work or study, and thus they have no time to chat with who come out of the same building with them. Usually, a smile or a nod to others is what people can only do for greeting. Similarly, after a whole day's tiring work, in the evening few people can still be energetic to talk to whoever they meet in their community. The only thing they are willing to do is rushing home. Weekends are so precious for them that majority of them will choose to stay at home to spend time with their family.

  Dragging urban residents out of their flats requires a series of methods. In the urban planning stage, residential buildings should not be designed that crowdedly in order to leave adequate open space for public activity areas like places for fitness facilities and gardens. Thereafter, under supervision of local governments, real estate developers ought to be responsible for installing those facilities and building gardens for local residents. After people moving in these buildings, local committees should be in charge of organizing community activities at weekends or on public holidays regularly, inviting who live around to offer them a chance to get relaxation from participating in some group recreational activities with their neighbors in the areas designed by governments and built by developers.

  Most of people have already realized the importance of getting along well with their neighbors, and however why they still do not know each other is just because they are more likely to spend their limited free time so as to loosen up by themselves. Once opportunities for both getting relaxation and knowing their neighbors are available, without a shadow of doubt people will be fond of them.





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