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标题: 雅思小作文高分句型整理 [打印本页]
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-11 10:35
标题: 雅思小作文高分句型整理
本帖最后由 montreal 于 2013-11-14 11:26 编辑
雅思小作文高分句型整理分享到：
摘要：新东方网雅思频道为各位考生整理了雅思小作文高分句型整理，供考生们参考使用，更多雅思写作辅导请继续关注新东方网雅思频道。
下面新东方网雅思频道为大家整理了雅思小作文高分句型，这些句子是一些最新雅思高分小作文句型的例句，你只需将空白的地方填上具体的内容就成，这些句子可以帮助你清楚明了的说明图表所反映的问题。
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2 the date lead us to the conclusionthat```
3 the date show```
4 the tree diagram reveals how```
5 the figures show```
6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of```
7 the pie graph depicts```
8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding```
9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ```
10 as is shown in the table ```
11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ```
12 this table shows the changing proportionof X and Y from ``` to ````
13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in```
14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the fluctuation of ```
15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level.
16 in the year between ```and ```
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17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.
18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.
19 the number sharply went up to ```
20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```
21 the percentage remainede steady at```
22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of.
23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ```
24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ```
25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily.
26 there is an upward trend in the number of ```
27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```
28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down.
29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinereduction in the ```reaching a figure of.
30 be similar to ```be the same as
31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ```
32 the difference between X and Y lies in ```
以上就是雅思小作文高分句型的详细内容，考生可针对文中介绍的方法进行有针对性的备考。最后，新东方网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩！
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-13 09:59
强烈推荐！雅思小作文高分必备句型
小编摘要：雅思小作文是有规律可循的，只要好好掌握几条规律，高分是可以写出来的。 开头句
A. bar graph/column graph直方图 / pie chart/饼状图 / line graph/曲线图 / solid line/实线 / break line/虚线 / dot line/点状线 + show/indicate/outline/illustrate + the general pattern of …
B. number/rate/percentage/figure + of … + rise/fall/increase/decrease/shoot up/decline + dramatically/sharply/steadily/slightly/drastically/gradually + from ... to ...
1. 描述曲线：
reach its peak/top/bottom/valley 或 remain the same 或 level off/taper off 或 fluctuate wildly/mildly
2. 数据升降：lose it attraction/become a general favorite
3. 同向变化：The trend continues through out the graph.
4. 事物归类：be categorized under 10 headings/be divided into 10 stages
5. 两张图表： the first piece of data/ the second set of date
6. 数据下降：10 percent of people preferred to do A in 1200， but only 5 percent of people stuck to the same preference in 1300.
7. 最低数据：Each year/month， there were at least 5 people involved in …
8. 数据接近：The year 1200 saw the least difference between A and B.
9. 数据关联：To sum up， the relation ship between A and B appear （inversely） proportional.
10. 数据组成：The total number is 100. Of this figure， 10 are A， 20 are B and 70 are C. Therefore， C accounts for the greatest number.
11. 数据对比：A occupies only 5%， which stands in marked contrast to the 95% of B
阐述原因：
A. People’s preference for bicycle reflects public dissatisfaction with bus service.
B. From the difference between.。. ， we can see the changes in our society and…
C.It appears that XXX directly affects the XXX
D. Obviously， people’s inclination to go out contributes to the decrease.
展望未来：
A.There might be a tendency of decreasing in the future.
B.The tendency would be continuing because…
Over the period from 1200 to 1300， the trend was towards a decrease in A， while there was an upward trend in B. There was a dramatic fall in A from 1205. However， from the year 1230 on， the rate of decrease slowed down and there was a more gradual reduction in A， reaching a figure of 10，000 in 1270. The number in B rose steadily， reaching 2000 in 1210， to a peak of 4000 in 1290.
数据翻倍：
A. It is 10 in 1200， but 30 in 1300，increased three times.
B. From just 100 in 1200 to over 4 times this amount in 1300.
比较速度：A. In 1200， increase was spectacular， compared with 1300.
B. A shows the greatest increase. B also shows an increase but it’s not as dramatic.
雅思写作小作文原则：
A. 不可能写的很好，关键是要很稳地写清楚。
B. 概括一些内在关联性或原因推测作为总结。
作者: calgary 时间: 2013-8-14 03:34
雅思小作文攻略+范文2例：表格图分享到：
2013-05-08 16:23 作者： 来源：互联网 字号：T|T
摘要：新东方网雅思频道为各位考生整理了雅思小作文攻略+范文2例：表格图，供考生们参考使用，更多雅思写作辅导请继续关注新东方网雅思频道。
下面新东方网雅思频道为大家整理了雅思小作文攻略+范文2例：表格图，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。 表格图
类型：
纵向比较—即自身前后的比较，具有历史性，可转为曲线图;
横向比较—与其他同类事物的比较。
原则：
首句永远概括全部;
中间永远找最值点描述;
最后总结概括
1.纵向比较：
题目：The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
范文： As can be seen from the table, walk and certain short-distance transportation, such as cycled and local bus tend to be less preferred. Of these, the local bus experienced the most dramatic decrease, from 429 miles to 274 miles within the 15-years period.
By contrast, the long distance vehicle enjoyed a significant increase over the period, spanning from 1985 to 2000, although there exists some differences. To be more specific, the number of miles that car traveled was 3,199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4,806 in the subsequent years. The figure by long distance bus more than doubled during the same period (54 miles vs.124 miles), while the miles by taxi trebled which were 13 miles and 42 miles respectively. Likewise, the use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also increased.
Overall, there is a considerable increase in total miles by all modes of transportation, compared with the data (4,740 miles) in 1985, with the increased use of cars possibly accounting for almost all of that increase.
作者: calgary 时间: 2013-8-14 03:35
2.横向比较：
题目：The table shows the number of foreign visitors (in millions) to 7 countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
范文： (Introduction)The table shows the total number of visitors to seven countries around the world and details the number of those visitors who came from the UK and the USA. Certain patterns are evident from these figures.
(Comparison1)Canada received more than twice as many visitors as Mexico, yet the percentage of visitors to those countries from the USA was about the same, 80%. 12 million Americans visited Canada while 5.5 million visited Mexico. British visitors to these two countries were much fewer in number, with 0.6 million visiting Canada and 0.1 million visiting Mexico.
(Comparison2)Australia had half as many visitors as Thailand (3 million vs 6 million), but the number of visitors to those countries from the UK and the USA was the same, 0.3 million.
(Comparison3)France and Ireland received more visitors from the UK (7.4 million and 2.4 million respectively) than from the USA. France had a higher total number of visitors than any of the other countries on the list. Over half of Ireland’s visitors came from the UK. Italy received 20 million visitors, of which 1.2 million were from the UK and 1.8 million were from the USA.
(Conclusion) Although the table shows a limited number of countries, it can be seen that British and American people tend to visit those countries nearest geographically. However, the relationship is not definitive.
以上就是新东方网雅思频道为大家整理的雅思小作文攻略+范文2例：表格图，非常实用。更多资讯、资料尽在新东方网雅思频道。最后，新东方网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-16 09:07
下面新东方网雅思频道为大家整理了雅思小作文攻略+范文：曲线图，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。 曲线图 范文 1(引题段)：
【第一句】The curve illustrates the number of cases of A-type crimes committed in the UK between the years 1990 and 2004.【第二句】It can be seen that A-type crimes decreased dramatically to 200 cases around the middle of the 1990s and then increased to 2000 before the year 2000.
范文 2：(全文)
From the graph, we can see clearly that in the early morning, at 6 a.m., few people watch TV. However, from this time onwards, the number of TV audience is on the rise. At noon, the people watching TV account for about 8% of the total population. In the period between 12:00 and 2:00 p.m., the TV audience experiences a sharp increase from 8% to approximately 18%.
From 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m., the figure remains constant at about 18%, then balloons to the peak of the day, reaching approximately 50%. The number of TV audiences drops dramatically from 10 p.m. till it reaches its bottom at 3 p.m.
On the other hand, there is a sharp increase in radio audience from 6.a.m to 9 a.m., peaking at about 28% at 8:30 a.m. However, from this point onwards, it declines gradually for the rest of the day, bottoming out at 4:00 a.m. the next day.
In brief, the number of TV and radio audiences varies according to different phases of time probably due to the different features of these two media.
以上就是新东方网雅思频道为大家整理的雅思小作文攻略+范文：曲线图，非常实用。更多资讯、资料尽在新东方网雅思频道。最后，新东方网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-16 09:10
雅思小作文地图题核心技巧：变化 分享到：
摘要：新东方网雅思频道为各位考生整理了雅思小作文地图题核心技巧：变化，供考生们参考使用，更多雅思写作辅导请继续关注新东方网雅思频道。
雅思小作文地图题是最近一年以来最流行的一种雅思小作文类型。所以对于这个类型的雅思小作文技巧大家还是要有一定的了解的。下面新东方网雅思频道就为大家介绍一个关于雅思小作文地图题的核心技巧，就是关于变化的描述，大家可以参考。
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化，那么“变化”词汇必须过关，变化包括两种：图形原有事物的改变，图形新添事物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变：
原有事物可说成：
The original/previous/former garden
原有事物尺寸上变大/变小：
The size of the library has been enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
原有事物在数量上增多或减少：
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
原有事物没了：
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
原有事物被改为：
A becomes B
A is transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B
A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
以上就是关于变化的雅思小作文地图题核心技巧的全部内容，大家可以看到，这个技巧在雅思小作文地图题当中是最常见的，也是大家最应该掌握的一个技巧。所以在备考雅思小作文地图题的时候，对上面的内容关注一下吧。最后，新东方网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩！
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-16 09:27
雅思A类小作文流程图《巧克力的制作》（含范文深度点评）（樊黎明） WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.
Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features.
Write at least 150 words.
【高分范文及深度点评】
The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程, stage：阶段，step：步骤】
Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans. Firstly,【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】when the pods are ripe,they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.【三个句子的并列：“句子A，句子B and 句子C”。】During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.【流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】
Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.
After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.
【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】
最后再总结一下流程图的特点：
特点一：现在时
特点二：定语从句
特点三：被动语态
特点四：顺序词
特点五：适当添加
特点六：无总结
（来源：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4ebfd1420100lzit.html）
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-16 10:42
雅思作文开头结尾万能公式
一、开头万能公式： 1.开头万能公式一：名人名言 有人问了，我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?，很好办：编！ 原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢
一、开头万能公式：
1.开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型：
A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2.开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：A recent statistics shows that …
二、结尾万能公式：
1.结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。
也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…,
Therefore, we can find that…
2.结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-16 10:43
雅思A类柱形图小作文范文
The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. Source: Office for National Statistics on beha
The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.
Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Source: Office for National Statistics on behalf of the Controller of Her Majesty's Stationery Office.
Study these three sentences and then write three similar sentences about other parts of the chart.
1 Women spend over twice as much time doing kitchen tasks as men.
2 Men spend 30 minutes a day doing kitchen tasks whereas / while women spend 74 minutes a day.
3 Women are more active in the kitchen than men (74 minutes a day for women as opposed to 30 minutes for men).
Sample Report
Look at the following sample answer to the writing task.
Write a word in each space.
The chart shows the average number of minutes per day men and women in Great Britain spend on jobs around the house.
In total, men spend just over two-and-a-half hours on household tasks whereas women spend slightly less than four hours. Women spend more than twice as much time doing kitchen tasks such as cooking and washing up as men (74 minutes for women as opposed to 30 minutes for men. Women are also more active in cleaning the house- it takes 58 minutes of their day compared to / with 13 minutes for men - and childcare, where women put in more than twice as much time as men.
On the other hand, men are more active in gardening and pet care, where they spend twice as long as women, and maintenance and DIY, on which they spend 15 minutes more than women. Women account for almost all the time spent on washing and ironing clothes. This takes them 25 minutes, while / whereas men spend just 2 minutes on this task.
Overall the figures show that women spend more time on routine domestic chores than men, while / whereas men do more household maintenance, gardening and pet care.
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-17 20:39
雅思小作文题目和范文
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IELTS Graph #1
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
·
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Model answer:
The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. Nearly80% of students under 26 years, study for their career. This percentage gradually declines by 10-20%every decade. Only 40% of 40-49yr olds and 18% of over 49yr olds studing for career reasons in lateadulthood.
Conversely, the first graph also shows that study stemming from interest increases with age. There areonly 10% of under 26yr olds studing out of interest. The percentage increases slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade, and increases dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly same number of 40-49yr olds study for career and interest. However 70% of over 49yr olds study for interest in comparison to18% studing for career reasons in that age group.
The second graph shows that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the third decade of life, and then increses in late adulthood up to about 44%. It is unclear whether employer support is only for career-focused study, but the highest level is for those students who mainly study for career purposes.
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 8 score. Here is the examiner'scomment:
This answer summarises the key features of both charts and integrates them well. Clear trends are identified and supported with appropriately-selected figures. The answer could only be improved by adding an introduction to the general topic of the charts.
The information is well organised, with a clearly-signalled progression. Linking words are used accurately and precisely, although there is occasional omission. Paragraphing is used well initially, but lapses in the later section.
A very good range of vocabulary is used to convey the information concisely and accurately with only occasional inappropriacy. Words are used precisely and there are no errors in spelling or word form.
A wide range of structures is used and most sentences in this answer are accurate. Errors are rare and do not affect communication in this answer
IELTS Graph #2
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in twodifferent countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Model answer:
The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.
Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increaseddramatically from about 500 km3 to around 3,000 km3 in the year 2000. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km3, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 300 km3, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.
The table illustrates the differences in agriculture consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26,500 km3) with that in the D.R.C. (100 km2). This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m3 compared with only 8 m3 in the Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agriculture water consumption can be in some countries.
作者: montreal 时间: 2013-8-17 20:41
雅思范文思路：A类满分小作文经典示例
Writing 1 Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write your answer in a word processing program on your computer.
The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Club satisfaction survey table
范文：
The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.
We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club, with only 5% dissatisfied. In contrast, however, only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied. The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities. Only 14% of women and 10% of men were unhappy with these, and the majority (64 and 63% respectively) were very positive. Finally, the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts. Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3% were unhappy, whereas nearly 40% of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.
Overall, the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities, while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.
作者: halifax 时间: 2014-1-9 11:26
五个方面谈雅思小作文怎么写
雅思小作文经常出现描述图表题，其分值约占写作部分的三分之一，由于其所占的比例较低，经常被考生所忽略。但是事实上，这类图标描述题类型可控，文 本使用上比较正式，语言上比较固定，因此考生们只要掌握了标准时的描写风格，以及一些固定的语言搭配，往往更加容易掌握，也是比较容易在短时间提高分数的 一个题型。
要做到短期内拿下图表描述题，你就需要深入了解小作文的类型，写作难点。图表描述题虽然在形式上复杂多变难以掌握，但是万变不离其宗，语言固定，形式固定，你需要做的就是以不变应万变。
图形描述题的难点之一是难以在短时间内找出该题需要表达的重点，其次缺乏此举，缺少书面表达的语言和亮点。对于题型出现的这些难点，南京环球雅思老师提出一些相应的建议，帮助大家克服考试中出现的这些难点。
一、寻觅小作文需要表达的重点
见到图形表达题，你心中就需要思考这个图形题需要表述的重点在哪里。作答时先说明再梳理数据。切不可将文章写成账本式的文字，否则，你就会得到很低的分数。
例 如：The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000. Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 2000.
文章的主句应该对文章要表达的趋 势，量的大小作出说明，相关的数据则补充在后面。雅思小作文考察的精髓还是查看考生的英文表达能力，精简凝练。你的描述要让阅卷者脑海中浮现出图形的样 本，数量和趋势等等相关变量。如果你能达到以上这些要求，那么小作文本身也就基本上合格了。
二、了解图形的分类规律
图形描述题，按照标准图形来分，可以分为line graph (curve), bar chart, pie chart以及table，按照表达重点来分，分为趋势类和大小类，分类依据于题中的时间列表。一般来说，出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主。
三、准备必要的表达方式
1. 与趋势有关的词语：
上升(动词)：increase, rise, climb, ascend, surge, shoot up
下降(动词)：decrease, decline, drop, fall, descend, plunge
持平(动词)：remain stable, keep constant, level off, flatten out
波动(动词)：fluctuate, wave, go up and down
快 速(形容词/副词)：considerable/considerably, significant/significantly,substantial/substantially,remarkable/remarkably, dramatic/dramatically
稳步(形容词/副词)：steady/steadily, stable/stably, moderate/moderately, modest/modestly
缓慢(形容词/副词)：slight/slightly, minimal/minimally, marginal/marginally
顶点(名词 /动词)：peak
趋势 (名词)：trend/ tendency
2. 与大小相关的词语：
Outnumber (动词)：在数量上超过The demonstrators were outnumbered by the police
Exceed (动词)：在数量上超过
Triple (动词)：变成三倍The figure has tripled.
Double (动词)：变成两倍The price of houses has virtually doubled over the past few years.
Mount to (动词)：达到
Counterpart (名词)：对应的另一方，比较的另一方 this product is better than its counterparts
此外，建议考生还应考虑一下题中数据和百分比有没有联系，如果有的话还应添加一些数据所占百分比的语句。
3. 相关词语：
百分比(名词)：proportion, rate, percentage, share
占据 (动词)：occupy, comprise, constitute, account for, represent.
数字：number, amount, data, figure
比例：rate, proportion, percentage, share
大约：roughly, about, nearly, approximately, a little less than, slightly more than
各自地：respectively, for each，severally
四、注重连词的使用
连词在语句中起着承上启下的作用，添加连词，可以增加文章的逻辑感，使得文章更加严谨，同时，文章中连词的使用也要讲究一定的形式，我们在文章中一般称之为形连。
五、Integrity and Perfection
文章有了恰当的表达方式，还需要进行一些细节方面的修饰，添加数据时，形式要整齐划一，有不随便删除和添加数量单位，增加连词的使用，加强文章的严谨度，采用一些多样化的数据添加方式，是文章看起来有理有据，中心思想贯穿全文。
主要数据添加方式有：
1. 利用标点，如括号和破折号
2. 利用介词，如with, at, to, by等
3. 利用分词或从句，倒装句
考生在备战雅思小作文的过程中，考生应按照以上的基础因此分析相关的真题和范文，多多总结经验，找出思想上的共性和有亮点的语句，并且进行模仿练习。我们有理由相信，同学们通过专门的训练，一定能在雅思小作文写作中取得好成绩。
作者: halifax 时间: 2014-1-9 11:58
雅思小作文完美高分必备
雅思小作文解析
雅思小作文，是个看似困难实则简单的写作类型。很多同学觉得就像我们小时候的看图说话，但拿到图后却又不知道该如何写。本文将带你由繁入简用二十个小时彻底搞定小作文。
第一个5小时：热身
无论是什么样的英语作文，都离不开语法的支持。它就像修房子的地基一样，只有牢固的语法基础，作文这座摩天大楼才能拔地而起。就小作文而言，我们可以将语法复习分为两个部分。即时态和句型。众所周知，英语十二大时态乃语法之根本，然而雅思小作文仅需两个时态即可搞定！从考官的满分作文来看，除了首句用一般现在时，后面的句子都可以用一般现在时。当然有一种情况例外，就是如果给你的图表上面有对将来的预测即你当前时间以后的情况的话我们就用一般现在时加表预测的词汇来使用就可以了。句型方面要求也不是很高，在我们中学阶段所学的简单句和复杂句上面找寻最合适的就行了，原则上雅思小作文并不推荐大家使用太过于复杂的长难句。从满分范文上就能看出端倪，一篇好的小作文就是在它身上抠不出更多的东西。所以，小品词，插入语，非谓语动词等的用法尤为关键和重要，请大家在准备阶段的时候多加复习。
第二个5小时：练习
此阶段的练习并非小作文的练习，而是在正式进入攻坚阶段前的准备性练习。请问你准备好了开始写作文了吗？相信大部分同学还没准备好！怎么办？拿出你的新概念英语，不要看原文，只看作者翻译的中文，尝试着再翻回到英文去。看看你的版本和英文原版还差多少。坚持一段时间后你会发现你的翻译水平上升了很多，至少是在句子翻译上面你会逐渐习惯原文的精炼和巧妙。此乃前期阶段练习写作的不二之法！！
第一个2.5小时：破冰
雅思官方规定了小作文写作时间20分钟最低字数150字，大作文写作时间40分钟最低字数180字。从这个层面就很好的印证了官方的那句话：”Writing Task 2 carries more weight.”小作文所占分值不如大作文高，但并不代表着它就不重要，往往小作文写得好坏足以影响后面大作文发挥的心情和状态。那么怎么样写好一篇小作文呢？
首先我们要确定所谓小作文究竟有哪些？其实就是两大类：主流类（曲线图、饼状图、柱状图和表格图），非主流类（流程图、示意图和地图）。针对不同的类别我们又不同的写法，但无论怎样都是遵循着游戏规则来的，即官方的四大评分标准：TA（Task Achievement）(任务完成) C&C（Coherence and Cohesion）(连贯与衔接) LR（Lexical Resource）(词汇资源) GR&A（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）(语法范围与精确)。听起来很抽象是不是？给你的捷径就是：三个六选一（选词汇，选句型和选连接）加上一个分段技巧（按内部逻辑关系分段、找最少属性分段和找对比和类比分段）的妙用就可以解决通杀大部分小作文了！再配合着五步解题法，那恭喜你，小作文方面可以独步江湖了！
五步解题法，即：看、分、解、定、写。拿到图表以后先看图例和任务要求，再有一个清晰的分段，雅思考官非常注重文章的逻辑性，所以你要有脉络清楚的分段，这是得高分的先决条件。然后解构分段后的内容，确定该写和不该写的部分，一篇好的高分作文是非常精炼的，你抠不出来任何多余的部分。其次是定词汇句型和连接，词汇决定句型，再用不同的连接手段将其糅合成多样化的句型搭配。这一切在3分钟内完成，最后剩下15分钟写出字迹工整的一篇180字左右的小作文，并给后面的大作文留出足够的时间和空间。看到此，你是否觉得小作文就是用现成的句型词汇加连接的排列组合了呢？对，雅思官方没有说小作文不能用套用句，它本来就是客观性的描写，所以用上3个六选一何尝不可呢？那么大家是否开始觉得想要试着写写了呢？且看第二阶段。
第二个2.5小时：巩固
曲线图是所有小作文里面最简单和基础的类别，写好了曲线图基本也就掌握了小作文的要领。曲线图又分为一根曲线，两根曲线，三个曲线和四根曲线的模式，其中一根曲线不会考到，两根曲线若干年前考过，三根曲线和四根曲线是目前最容易考的，但无论怎样，曲线图的写法都脱离不了总体趋势描写、起始点、末尾点、最低点、最高点、交叉点和落差。做到这几步，TA部分的分数也就不会低了。剑7Test2的那道题相当具有代表性，请在不看范文的情况下用上面所讲的五部解题法并配合三个六选一的技巧写出第一篇属于自己的小作文。
饼状图，顾名思义就是像饼一样的图形中给你不同的属性所占的不同部分，写此文章最关键就是不能写成流水账，任务要求我们要Make comparisons，那么我们就可以从这里入手用同等属性在不同饼里面的上升下降保持不变来定位分段加比较，请注意在选词上面要和曲线图区分开来。同样在剑7Test4里为我们提供了一篇非常好的四个饼的真题，此乃练习之绝佳材料。
柱状图完全就是曲线图的变体，横坐标上若是时间或者数字的话我们直接将每根柱子顶端连接后按曲线图的写法写就行了，否则按饼状图的写法写即可。表格图相对来说写法较为综合，怎样在给出的那么多信息中找出最有代表性的写是关键，从横纵轴上入手，发现变量最为丰富的用曲线图和饼状图的混合词汇句型带出对比和描述即可，剩下的非关键信息点不写也罢。写完剑6Test2你会发现你收获很多的！
第三个2.5小时：跃升
写完前面四篇文章你是否发现你的文章和满分范文还是不小的差距？这是很正常的，任何一个没有接触过雅思作文的同学都会经历三个阶段，即不知如何下笔阶段，才思泉涌小作文写成大作文阶段，精炼到无限接近满分范文阶段。所以你现在需要做的事情就是拿起手中的满分范文仔细钻研，发现并找出它细微的小品词，插入语，从句等，以求让自己的文章更加精辟和精炼。
下面一个应该解决的就是小作文的第二大类，非主流类的流程图、示意图和地图了。此乃众多烤鸭心中的梦魇，其实一样不用害怕，只要你愿意冷静的花上几分钟时间去把它们的图例和内容吃透，并按照要么空间顺序要么时间顺序或者是按照题目要求去写就行了。而且，大部分非主流的小作文会给出足够多的词汇在图上，你只需要利用不同的时间或空间的连接词配合着多样化的句型将其组合起来即可，理论上来说它们比主流类的小作文更加简单！剑6Test3上那道蚕的生长过程以及丝绸的制造步骤便是最好的例证，你会诧异的发现原来满分范文是那么的简单和容易。至于地图题这个逐渐在抬头的题型，剑5Test3上那道开超市的选址题会让你清楚的认识到原来地图题就是分析不同地点的优缺点并加以比较得出自己的结论，虽然它的写法开始有了像大作文偏向的痕迹。总之，非主流毕竟是非主流，以不变应万变乃破此类题之王道！
第四个2.5小时：完善
切记：任何武林绝学拿到以后仍需大量的练习才能笑傲江湖，小作文亦是如此！仅仅只是上面四篇文章还不足以让你轻松自如的面对和锻炼身体控迎面而来的不同题型。那么，借助手中所有的剑3到剑7这五本真题集，把总共20道小作文题目都练习一遍。用五步解题法，借助三大分段技巧和三个六选一将所给图表一层一层剥开重新用最精辟的语言描述出来，再去吸取满分范文的优点和总结考生低分范文的不足。你将来的小作文会让考官眼前一亮的！
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